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Thomasin LaMay's avatar

Oh, so sorry to hear. Given the number of federal jobs in my area of MD, I hear this every day now. Be well.

Here's mine. No idea where it came from, but after I saw the prompt I read the rest of your post and this was what happened.

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Sometimes words are hard, so twig spends the night

A long storm - fierce with pride in all its rhymes and brittle lights - blows out the night. Witches’ wind and big branches break in my bedroom window, put a twig on my pillow. Wet, cold, briny. Twig asks if it can spend the night. I smell its bark and say of course, not sure at all that I’m awake or what I have agreed to. I’m living in liminal. Convex thoughts, the world’s a mess, unfindable words, but I’m curious. So I ask twig, do you miss your tree, now that you’re blown off? Does it worry you that all tree’s roots reside below and forever? – for me, that would mean a kind of death – and tree’s branches, all the twigs, do they love the roots, have they even met? Do they kiss, can they talk? Does the trunk hold your heart?

There’s no response to any of this but the wind picks up so I go on. Twig, I want to know, is this really me who is here? do “I” exist? By that I mean is this voice mine, can I make beauty with my words, or am I just a borrower of verbs?

Twig seems to understand we will not kiss tonight. But the wind calms and twig speaks kindly: take your heart out, put it here. I will scrape it raw with all the frozen wreckage of yourself and you must watch. But then, the sun. We’ll place your heart in the middle of the poem. Write from there.

Mountain Mama musings's avatar

Sorry to hear about your husband's job loss. That really sucks. Hope something good comes from it. 💓

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